Tuesday, April 19, 2011

Short Story Idea

Don't know where I'm going to take this, but here is the first paragraph of my new short story.  Let me know what you think.

The oppressive heat settled around us like a protective glove.  Quickly we got to the task at hand.  Within minutes, we were bathed in sweat.  Struggling and striving, we stacked the bodies into little pyramids of six and ten.

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